Page 329
Posted on August 8, 2014 by Celesse
I know some of you might have been hoping (or fearing) to see a scene where Malkar and Rollin fight it out, but it's already been made pretty clear what happens. So we've opted to skim over it in favor of continuing with present events. Hope you all are okay with that :)

142 thoughts on “Page 329”

  1. Pan

    Oh no

    1. MysteryGal790

      Come on where is that last minute rescue when you need it?!?!
      O_O

      1. MysteryGal790

        Ooh! I got an idea!
        Hit him in the head with a rock!
        It would have a 15.2% chance of working…..
        Maybe?

        1. DarthJazzHand

          Kick him in the crotch! Although it’s also Feral’s crotch, but in these circumstances I’m sure he would forgive her!

        2. PersephoneCA

          INDEED! This circumstance calls for reasonable crotch kickery! Do it Meela!

        3. LaffyTaffy

          Amen! C’mon Meela, kick ‘im where it hurts!

        4. Green Arrow

          DarthJazzHand, you read paranatural, don’t you???

        5. Green Arrow

          it’s just, that picture is from paranatural… anyways:) i very much agree with you(;

  2. Lilbby

    Ohgawdno.

  3. Cadevan

    Nooo! Poor Feral, when he snaps out of this he’ll feel so awful for everything, and now he’ll know about her demon side, and just no!

    1. LaffyTaffy

      I agree…
      Did Feral kill Holland?

      1. Arika

        That would be terrible if he did but i dint think so.

  4. wow

    sh*t sh*t sh*t sh*t sh*t sh*t sh*t

    1. Yami

      It just got real.

  5. HinoteOokami

    Bad demon! Give us back Feral!

  6. Meela-cosplayer

    OMG!! THIS IS GOING TO BE INTENS ISENT IT?!!! 0w0

  7. Oh Dear

    NON! NEIN! NO!

    1. Arika

      Good use of different languages there oh dear. *claps*

      1. GabrielMri

        Shit! Merde! Mierda! Scheisse! Kuso! Harah! That should do it. Does anyone else not like this guy?

  8. DozerTheDozerian

    Hurry up and hug him, Meela! This ought to work!

    1. Not Me

      I wish it was that easy. …maybe it is?

      1. DarthJazzHand

        YES! HUG HIM! It’ll put you in a perfect position to knee him in the crotch…

        1. Not Me

          0_o there are other things you can do to a crotch…

          like set it on fire after you’ve sent a tent pole through his rectum…

          they do have those “bags of holding”… If she can get her hands on them who knows what she can pull out of them.

        2. Arika

          ….. I have no words for the comment.

  9. Wapsitax

    Anyone else notice the faint glow around Meela in the last panel? I wonder if that’s Mal (unlikely considering the color) Meela, Holland or just artistic flair…

    1. Clampity

      Oh god, it might be Feral trying to absorb some of Meela’s demon energy. Like a demonic spirit bomb.

    2. Wapsitax

      Otter maybe even Jyaku…?

    3. flyteck

      It’s either Malkar trying to absorb Meela or Meela about to go all kick-ass demon. Considering it’s yellow I’m thinking Meela. Malkar’s magic is black/red and Holland’s is blue.

      1. Dinosauregg

        Thinking the same thing here!

    4. StarPanda

      I remember seeing the same yellow glow when Meela transformed into her normal wolf form. Maybe she’s going to try to fight him off in her wolf form?

  10. Clampity

    Where is Piper and Jyaku when you need em?!

    1. Summer

      On their way hopefully?

  11. Camogirl27

    Jyaku your kinda failin’ us here!

  12. MI

    Not showing the scene I believe is a good choice. Though out of curiosity, maybe in the gallery section or somewhere, I’d love to see Meela’s father’s demon form. Did he transform into a wolf like Meela?

    1. sumreader

      I like this idea. I want to see Ronin and Meela’s mom in their wolf forms.

      1. Aroree

        I second that motion.

        1. Not Me

          I thirdly approve the notion… if the girls are generous.
          ::begs:: pretty please?

        2. GabrielMri

          We need all of this… if you have time in your already busy schedules please consider drawing all of these.

  13. Wuffy

    God the feels! -crawls into the ACF corner- I bring Oreos!

    1. Fuschia

      Oh god… I brought cookies. Theres Chocolate Chip. Sugar cookies, rasin, Frosting, White Chocolate, Double Chocolate.

      1. ShiroyukiOnna

        I brought the pillows! -tosses pile onto everyone-

        1. Flames

          I brought plushies and tissues!

        2. FallenFlight

          I brought only my tears. So many tears. Like rain.

        3. Wuffy

          Hugs plushie of Piper’s fox form- Danke! I needed to hug something xD

        4. KaelinaLuvsLomaris

          I am going to bury my face into this pile of pillows and cry until next Friday!

        5. Not Me

          ::been here for three weeks::

        6. proxycat

          *Snuggles into pile of pillows and peeks out*, I’m just gonna stay here until next friday, also if you guys want to pass the oreos this way that’d be great

        7. IrondragonMetals

          I’m bringing pizza. You can’t go without pizza, it’s amazing!

        8. GoMeela

          I bring pillowpets!!!!! *snuggles into ACF corner* anyone want one?

        9. hedgehog1010

          Do you have a Meela Pillowpet? Then yes please.

    2. Chigiri

      This corner has been so suspenseful the past few weeks .___. *noms on vienna sausages*

    3. Maisy

      *stuffs mouth with cookies* Why can’t friday come sooner!!!

    4. SeaCrest

      *crawls into corner*

      I brought Oreos! Regular, and Reese’s Peanut Butter ones.

      *hides under blanket*

    5. WhiteWolfWoman

      NOOOOO!!! MEELA!!! OK, I brought the Ovaltine (I can’t have hot chocolate; too rich) and chewy granola bars… *crawls into spare space and curls under blanket* Please, be ok, Meela! Feral, FIGHT MALKAR!!!

      1. Arika

        I bring nothing but tears and huggies T-T

  14. Emmy

    What..no..no..NO RUN MEELA OH NONONONONONO!
    *makes a giant pillow mansion* ALRIGHT EVERYONE GRAB YOUR SNACKS AND TISSUES! We gonna be hanging out here till next week!

    1. Horselover

      * Brings truckful of tissues and snacks ( tofu included) * Is this enough? And yes tofu, I`m vegetarian. deal with it

      1. hedgehog1010

        Yay for fellow vegetarians! Thanks for the tofu, and of coarse the tissues. :’3

        1. Horselover

          YAY!! more vegetarian fans! And sorry if I sounded pushy, I live in Texas, no one there is vegetarian , and when I tell them I am they go all crazy! They all ways say stuff like ” How could you live without meat?” I’m sorry but , I cant eat those fluffy little animals!!! SORRY FOR THE RANT

    2. proxycat

      *snuggles into pillows* It’s gonna be a long week

  15. name

    There were 3 children tho, did one die? who is the third?

    1. Yami

      Meela had two brothers (they were twins I think), as could be seen on the previous page. And I’d guess that he probably didn’t get away…

    2. Diem-kitty

      Both the father and the other brother were killed at the same time. Go back to page nine.

  16. Snap Zazzles

    Remember when Feral’s evil side said in the previous pages that a little bit of “daddy’s demon power” was enough to bring him out or something? I bet he’s gonna absorb her energy!!! D:

  17. WolfLover

    Take away his Bad juju Meela!! >.<

  18. Cinni-mon

    She needs to realize this is mal and use that to her advantage to throw him off his game so she can get away maybe

  19. Nafsi-chan

    NOOO!! RUN MEELA, RUN! Someone do something! We need help here! Where’s Jayku?! I bet he could help!

  20. Sandy

    The word “but” was used one too many times on this page, I think.

    1. Maisy

      I agree. The “But me?” in the 2nd panel sounds kind of awkward and doesn’t really flow well from the previous page. I think just “Me?” would sound better C:

      1. MI

        Stopping at the 2nd panel where Malker says, “He would never have taken the job,” and cutting off the rest of the panels, the dialogue on the first panel here flows better. I think perhaps this is just a minor continuity error.

        1. MI

          To fix the error would be to have Malkar repeat that sentence in some form like, “Feral was such a weak minded (insert whatever here), he couldn’t do the job, but I had no problem with it.”

        2. arielleassault

          Every “but” could be cut from this page and it would flow more smoothly in my opinion. I’m so glad I wasn’t the only one bothered by this!

    2. Summer

      Yeah, I think the one where he says, “But your brother,” could be changed to “Your brother, however, was a slippery little thing and took you with him.” The third ‘but’ would seem less awkward then.

    3. Summer

      I would have loved to see a fight between Malkar and Rollin, but I’d rather the scene progress further instead, so I totally agree with your decision.

      1. Summer

        Oops posted that in the wrong place by accident…Ignore this comment^^

  21. Chevyo

    Wow what a plot twist. And just when you thought things couldn’t get any worse…

  22. Featherark

    Excuse me while I continue to collect my feelings. *lays down on floor*
    The suspense is real. ;;

    1. Horselover

      * Drags into ACF corner* I just stayed since last week

  23. wolfie

    but me but your brother but now… Lol way too many butt’s

    1. Minzki

      He’s a but(t) man.

  24. Flik

    Nothing stops a demon like an instinctive kick to the groin.

    1. hadah

      That might cause the opposite reaction for a demon

      1. DarthJazzHand

        What is the opposite reaction to the kick in the groin?
        “Oh, thank you very much. That was most kind of you. To repay for your joyous kick I’ve decided not to eat you anymore. Good day to you!”

        1. Summer

          I think they mean he would flip out instead, but that comment was still the funniest thing I’ve read today, LOL

  25. Minzki

    Oh crap! Meela, hit and run!
    And maybe take Holland with you too
    RRRunnn

  26. Dragon

    Nooooo!!!

  27. Caprine

    Feral fight it you love Meela she’s precious to you PROTECT HER GODDAMMIT

  28. KaiyAyanna

    …. So if Feral does come back is she even going to look at him the same? And honestly the demon is giving off creeper vibes. He’s just stroking her horns like that o.O RUN MEELA, RUN!!!!!

    1. KaiyAyanna

      Also…. Didn’t she have 2!!!!!!!! Brothers?!?!?!? O.o damn… Sadness!!! TT^TT

  29. lunanitewolf

    Can I jus say I love this comic the art is amazing and the story is great I hate that ppl complain here in the comments. but that’s ok I shall join this feelings corner and sit here till the new page :)

  30. Leah

    JYAKU

    USE YOUR CAPE.

  31. LastPage

    This is unbelievably suspenseful. I’m on the edge of my seat and hiding in the corner of the bomb shelter at the same time! Another great page guys.
    Returns to the corner with the rest of the ACF.

    1. Ruby

      Hey, what does ACF mean? The interwebs have been no help….

      1. EmilyS

        I think it has something to do with “camping” until the comic updates, but I’m not sure.

      2. Flames

        Alliance of the Corner of the Feels.

      3. Viola Caprice

        Ha! See, I called it! We coined a new acronym here! That makes me so excited. XD

  32. Shinny .

    oH GOD IT’S HAPPENING

  33. LastPage

    Also might I add that perhaps the yellow glow is how Malkar sees Meela and the yellow haze is the Meela Demon energy radiating off of her. Just a theory.

    1. MI

      I think Meela’s aura is red based and crackles like lightning on the past scenes where it surfaces. So The yellow aura is still a mystery so far.

  34. Aroree

    Nuuu….snap out of it Feral! Meela! Use cool-down hug/slap….or….head butt him! That always works!

  35. Sam

    Just wanna comment and say that i love your description. I hate waiting in suspense for pages of comics for them to show a death scene that was obvious or waste an entire page of no dialogue and just random fighting lol. I know some people like it and all, but i am so happy that i can further on with the story. You guys rule! And this comic rocks. Cant wait for the next page!!

  36. Sanu Wolff

    Why do I feel like the dark one might fall for meela instead……I mean the way despite his roughness seems almost ready to caress her baby demon horns……I’m sorry maybe I’m just a romantic but I call it as I see it peeps.

    1. MI

      More like creepy romance to me. Like he’s about to rape and murder her type. I hope that won’t happen!

      1. Not Me

        …not rape and murder,
        more like in a secret room she is a human slave/keepsake that no one else touches… or they die.

        1. what

          I hope this isn’t an idea being romanticized by people.

        2. Not Me

          too late.

        3. Sanu Wolff

          Actually I was thinking similar but more likeprotective guard type like the whole Seb-Ciel in BB.

  37. laugeo

    I think because Feral and Meela have some kind of special connection (hence the dreams about Feral’s past Meela’s been having), he’s about to accidentally trigger Meela’s demon side and the ultimate fight will begin!

  38. ghostinmachine7

    time to take evasive action meela.

    1. DarthJazzHand

      Do a barrel roll!

  39. Eclipse

    SHBSNDKDHSGWKWPODBBDKSIW I DMFJDBCSKHEBCSBSM

  40. arielleassault

    Please consider editing this page, three desperate sentences all begin with “but”, it’s a little tedious.
    Please understand this is only intended as constructive criticism, and not meant to be rude. I genuinely really enjoy this comic! The art and story are both great!!

    1. arielleassault

      ^ three separate* sentences.
      Not desperate.
      Sheesh, I’m a fool!!

    2. Algy

      Yes we know it does sound a little strange. We will review it upon our return from Otakon because we were in a bit of a rush to finish the pages before then.

      1. Not Me

        ::bows:: どうものでよろしくお願いします。

      2. Ferf

        “But me?” “However your brother…” “And now I have a chance to finish my work!”

        A possible fix

  41. Hroovitnis

    wait… there are two brothers, we only ever hear about one! who is the other brother, and what happened to him???

  42. Fat Protector

    OK so first time commenting but i have a bit to say.
    First: Kick the ^$*^)&*ing crotch.
    Second: glow is probably her power from her moms side not dads.
    Finally: I surround the cushion Fort with a fence and Gatling guns because i anticipate an attack of some kind. Also i brought pocky, hot chocolate, hot cider, Chips, a BBQ meats and a grill, and some of my dads homemade pie. (he’s a chef)

  43. Fat Protector

    Excuse me wile i start up the grill. ill start handing out burgers and hot dogs in a couple of minutes.

  44. Lilart12

    OMG NO!!!!! F*CK NO!!! $h*t where is a teleportation device when you need one?!?!?!?!?! F*CK

    1. Not Me

      I’m all for having Meela trick him into taking a card from the deck of many things (D&D) & drawing:

      The Fiend King of Clubs -Lawful Evil- A powerful evil outsider takes notice of the character and sets plans in motion to destroy him.

      :)

  45. Fat Protector

    Foods ready!!!!!!!!! Come and get it.

    Also the TP machine is back at my place. :)

  46. DarthJazzHand

    Wait, so Meela’s dad is named Rollin? As in “They see me Rollin”?

  47. Wolf_Moon_532

    DO LIKE FERAL HAS SHOWN YOU!! KICK HIM IN THE HEAD!!!

    1. LaffyTaffy

      AMEN TO DAT.

  48. LaffyTaffy

    FERAL STOP IT.
    STOP IT BEFORE I GIVE YOU A SPANKING.

  49. Falcolf

    Go Meela, go! Turn into a demon, attack to throw him off then grab Holland and run! Prove demons aren’t all bad! (Meela is too pretty as-demon to be evil! Last time she only killed that dude to defend herself and she only bit Holland I think because he spooked her… considering how she had been attacked just before that, anyone would be jumpy and she wasn’t expecting any help at the time to come to her aid.)

  50. I'm really sad...

    – I know this is off topic, but I just need to say:

    Orson: The report, Mork.

    Mork: This week I discovered a terrible disease called loneliness.

    Orson: Do many people on Earth suffer from this disease?

    Mork: Oh yes sir, and how they suffer. One man I know suffers so much he has to take a medication called bourbon, even that doesn’t help very much because then he can hear paint dry.

    Orson: Does bed rest help?

    Mork: No because I’ve heard that sleeping alone is part of the problem. You see, Orson, loneliness is a disease of the spirit. People who have it think that no one cares about them.

    Orson: Do you have any idea why?

    Mork: Yes sir you can count on me. You see, when children are young, they’re told not to talk to strangers. When they go to school, they’re told not to talk to the person next to them. Finally when they’re very old, they’re told not to talk to themselves, who’s left?

    Orson: Are you saying Earthlings make each other lonely?

    Mork: No sir I’m saying just the opposite. They make themeslves lonely, they’re so busy looking out for number one that there’s not enough room for two.

    Orson: It’s too bad everybody down there can’t get together and find a
    cure.

    Mork: Here’s the paradox sir because if they did get together, they wouldn’t need one. Isn’t that zenlack?

    ~ Rest in Peace Mr. Williams…

    @}–;–

    1. Arika

      HA that made me crack up :D god job on that story it was halarious

      1. Still sad...

        0_o
        …I can’t tell if you just worded it wrong, ( & don’t know if you got my refrence) but this is a quote from my favorite sitcom of all time… “Mork & Mindy”… Robin Williams played ‘Mork’…

        I never thought he would ‘go’ how he did… no one truly knows another’s turmoil.

        1. Arika

          Oh sort i ddint get it.

        2. it's ok...

          ::huggs:

  51. LastPage

    May I just say that this fight has to end somewhere. We are all focused on the fight and not where it’s going. A number of random and terrible things could happen from this fight. 1. Some one could die, this perhaps shocking feral out of his demon state at the look of his dead friends. He could leave the rest of the group unconscious and continue on to take over the world. Some really cool demon secret could be revealed and we could discover Ferals secret if the feral inside chooses to fight Malkar. Meela and everyone else could be seriously injured and some how get away leaving demon feral to hunt them. Meela could just then unlock some ancient power and save feral from Malkar. Or they could fight. You know any way works for me. As long as it’s some crazy epic plot twist. *continues to write theories in the corner with the rest of the AFC.* *munches chocolate bar in the pillow fort*

  52. LastPage

    This page is so good. And for all you crazy people out there who have or are about to ask this: YES Tannor does have a twin brother that was killed along with their father. DEAL WITH IT

  53. Ellaanabeth

    Oh wow, it took me like, 3 reads to understand that the first convo box in the second shot was actually the demon saying ‘but me’ instead of ‘BLT me’. Which made NOOOOOOOO sense by the way. The ‘u’ is difficult to make out since the thin side blends into the black. : (

    1. Arika

      SAME HERE at first i read through it then went to the next panel then went back to it and read it over and over again till i got “but me”

  54. OH DEAR

    JAVLA !!!!!!!

  55. AlextheparanoidAndroid

    Don’t panic…….. ok totally panic!

  56. Ellaanabeth

    So I get skipping over the past scene, but I am intensely curious as to whatever happened to the other brother. Or is that a mystery for another day?

    1. Celesse

      There’s nothing terribly important in Tannor’s death, but we’ll try to work in some way to show it before the end of the sotry.

  57. Green Arrow

    yay, this is my first comment!!!

  58. Ana

    Wait, if Meela ran away with Tannor, what happened to the other brother?

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